Damn it. Forgot to update one of Lyphia's Demonfolk tags.

Another error... somehow forgot to fill in the descriptions for about 6 of the 2.0 uber late game items. That was... bizarre.

They're in the 1.0 patch. If you used the ghetto, grab the text-fix.

Hello friend thanks for the patch. I noticed one while playing.

Emelita: "You know, isn't it actually kinda scary to be the first to talk to an undine?" <- Emelita's teasing Yuela specifically. More like 'Aren't you just afraid to meet an undine for the first time?'
Yuela: "I wonder why it's like that." <- More like 'How did you come up with that?'

also Tian: "She died of illness, but he can't accept it and is still looking fora cure for her." <- 'for a'

Issue:
The generic Transmigration scripts didn't get moved to the right directory so weren't translated/updated in the patch. It'll be fixed in the next patch. It takes probably 120+ hours to get to that point anyway.

Chapter 5 - Serawi or how crayl made me stop playing because......just no.



"Please come in." or "Come in." imo



"the same way we did many times before."?



"We came here to collect materials for the Gnome Stone..." imo



Wil didnt even speak. and the narration didnt point that yuela started talking to him. Poor guy is just there. so "Wil" instead of "you"



"alchemist's tall tale." imo



was used before and is awkward in this line. use "recognition" imo



"way" imo



"What was that about" fits better imo



"I'm from Kena village." imo. also it feels more natural for me to say "is there anything you can do" instead of "make"



"taken without regard."?



elves was repeated too much. "elves." -> "our people." imo



"the workload keeps adding up." imo



"my door" imo



weird since she was admonishing him for working recklessly. should be "As long as I don't go too far." maybe? or "As long as I don't work myself to death."



awkward. "as I'm leaving the gate." feels more natural



maybe its just me, but i see a "y" too many at my end



felt awkward. "Yes and no." imo



"when we were together" imo



"apparently it really is a true story..." imo



switch imo. "it's not possible for me right now, is it?"



missing a period. ".." -> "..."



"I guess that's true..." imo



"until now" imo. also this scene was really what i needed...stupendous eushully. stay classy.

commisioned -> commissioned



ould -> would



on -> own

Self-note:
Alexandrite's flavor text overflows out of the box slightly.
Fixed in my files now.

Went ahead and updated the textfix pack to spite a Canadian.

Just has the fixes mentioned above.

Final Chapter





her her => her
Aroduc edit:
"faith holy" too

few more I noticed while playing

Rosanna "My call was not for you. It seems you have been making special friends la... hm?" -> Meaning lost in first sentence. 'I think you know why I've called you here.'

Rosanna "Consider this a warning for coming here... Return, and I will teach you the full consequences of your actions." -> Meaning garbled. She's going to warn Wil, not the others, and she's going to teach them what sort of place this is right now. 'Reserving his warning for later... come here. I'll teach you exactly what kind of place this is."

Crayanne "The air here is bad. It's more stuffy than nature... It's really weird." -> in this case, 'a little interesting' rather than 'really weird.'

Crayanne "Hmm... Then how about you introduce yourself. That would be perfect right now." -> Meaning lost in second sentence. More like 'Although it's not like we don't know already.'

Ha. Must've been late at night when I went through that. No idea how I got a couple of those.

Fixed. Will be updated circa Monday.

Ha. Whoops. Slime cameo monster (ultra late NG+) descriptions slightly flow out of text box.
Taken care of now.

Help me I have the problem, When I already install game,patch,english patch,and text fixed patch

but when I entered the game and press new game it will automatically close and always be right this. Help me please

Found the following scattered over about 20 hours of gameplay in the last 2 days... seriously addictive

Crayanne "N-No, it's nothing. ...Yeah, I want to see other forests." Second sentence: '...So you want to see other forests.'

Crayanne "...He's okay. He's been able to overcome his challenges so far." Think this should be '...Alright. As long as he can overcome the challenge I give him.'

Yuela "I see... Then I will speak to him. I will also be having lunch." First sentence: 'I see... Then this concludes our conversation.'

Yuela "You...! What are you doing with your blade!? It is our life!" Not really an error, but 'What of your sword!?' is clearer / makes more sense plot wise

Yuela "...My sister is beautiful." 'was'

Yuela "The monk had a dog once. I heard him say it was a white dog. Dogs are faithful to their masters." Second sentence 'It had a white coat and only obeyed him.'

Yuela "I have no reason I should want to be with you... Don't you think so?" Lost the meaning. 'I simply want to be with you... must I have another reason?'

Kohakuren "Splendid indeed.... I did not expect a human body to last this long." Overly literal? 'A mere human' may be more appropriate

Elizasleyn "You wished to hide your visit from everybody's eyes...? Is that what you are saying?" -> 'So you are positive no one is aware of this visit...? Can you guarantee that beyond the shadow of a doubt?'

Yuela "It seems that the stories were lacking... Her appearance was angelic, just like Melodiana." -> 'Although I've only heard your description... apparently her appearance was angelic, just like Melodiana?'

missing period at end of sentence


Status Screen - Title for Ms. Eukleia

Fourh -> Fourth or if it's like that due to lack of space maybe 4th instead



Yuidora -> Angels



2nd sentence would read better as "I'd like to show it to you."



forbiding -> forbidding



"eliminate" doesn't seem right for referring to an area, maybe use "secure" instead, or perhaps "eliminate any threats in this area"



acknolwedge -> acknowledge



"yy" at end of sentence



awkward wording, maybe change "who has" to "since you have"

Found something untranslated:
http://i44.tinypic.com/10609e1.png

If you know about it and have it ready for a future patch, can you please tell me what it says?

It's an item overflow handler. Stop cheating.

Ah, ok, thanks. Guess I shouldn't believe SoilerAL when it says max is 9999.

Chapter 5 - Serawi Route Just another day at Greenpeace



"them." imo. since wil is actually eating and not playing with aht. emi and yuela are.



sounded awkward after the fade out/fade in moment. imo "So you need a substitute for that shell..." or something



"no sign of that dragon in the horizon." imo



"speculation" imo



"I examined it" sounds more professional coming from a merchant.



"Wel" -> "Well"



I think i heard "Tougijou" so i guess: "area" -> "arena"

Found some untranslated lines.
These are from when I started ch 3, after the scene with Uya and Emelita + random children, speaking with the barkeep
There are also some from ch2, though I forgot to take a shot of those (lines also appeared when speaking with the barkeep)

Use the text fix~

happens -> happen



then -> them



belive -> believe



This would probably read better with "do" changed to "enter"



discusson -> discussion



delete "like" or alternatively change it to "like it's"



This sentence reads a bit awkwardly, deleting "probably" could help



need -> need it

Fixes above looked at/taken care of and added to the text fix as well as a number of minor cleanups to flavor text, one slightly inconsistent part of the interface, etc.

Thought about adding a notation somewhere to the Append 2.0 bridge quest (all those optional 2.0 quests actually), then remembered that it already fills up all available space and I can't add new lines.

Stupid Eushully.

Report 2.0 Dungeon (the level 90 ones on the map) inconsistency, bad wording, and overflows if you want, but I'm in the process of going through them and cleaning them up a bit.

long -> longer



they're -> their



benefitted -> benefited



I -> I'd



reccomend -> recommend


Mission Description - Survey Kalenri River!

line break after the v in "very"



for -> of



decided -> decide



extra "about"



accusing -> accuse

Ragsmuena ".........You are uneasy."
Ragsmuena "You are concerned... You want to look. ...But why... I don't know..."
Yuela "Perhaps it is just the final vestiges. That is likely what makes me curious about you."
I believe there's subject confusion in these sentences. Ragsmuena is concerned with / uneasy / curious about Yuela, rather than the other way around.

Ragsmuena "You are not convinced there's no reason. Now you won't care anymore." -> I don't think the meaning quite gets across... she's saying 'Once I explain why I'm not asking you [for anything], you'll understand and stop bothering with me.'