From Hannah's Pilgrimage
Hannah: "I only respected them from afar, but you have made Yuidora a familiar sight within Yuidora."
She chokes a little bit when I push against the back of her thought. She looks up at me with moist, pleading eyes.
Hannah: "Mch... nch... Haaa... It's wrapping around my through... It's hard to swallow...nk...nmmm...gulp..."
Hannah: "A-aaah... A...mazing... It feels too body... I can't control myself... Mmmmnnn...aaaaaahn!"

Also, I don't think Phinilly's original title is supposed to be Phinilly. According to the nip wiki, it's 精霊王女.

When you ask yuela to bring the skeleton a message tells "substitute shells" instead of "complete the altar" (it's all right in the quest list)

In the yuela first h-scene - "Y-you are rubing..." instead of "rubbing".

in one of the yuichiri events there is a "but it got fun After a while" (capital letter)

withering medicine quest, Tian's words: "he can't accept it and is still looking fora cure for her". - missing whitespace

before shinigami battle: "but i would rather her be slain by anyone" - instead of "rather like her"

Also Leguna's name is euro-style transcribed as Rogner Ashes, isn't it?

"Withering Medicine" <==> "Wasting Medicine"

The latter only appears in the recipe book while the former appears in all other instances.

Found some untranslated part on NG+ Chp.2

Request of : Demonfolk Rumors (?) <-- Translated in the Quest Section
Client : Bar Owner

Screenshoot :

Melodiana "You say it is a joke, but you are not one to be open with the truth. How can we trust you?" -> Opposite meaning: She may joke, but she is not one to lie outright. I believe we can trust her words.

Sharty "I can always give you a lift so it's easy to resist. Okay?" Second part of the first sentence lost meaning, she's telling the girl not to sulk.

Sharty "I knew I should come play with the kids since we got back. You want to play too, Wil?" First sentence is off. 'I think I'll play with these kids before I head back home.'

Sharty "You think it's weird... that's why I didn't want to say." 'I think it's strange myself... but I can't stop.'

Jane "The women's is full. There are fewer women fighters than men, and your stall used to be part of the women's facilities." Second part of the second sentence is wrong. Jane's saying the showers are full because Wil's party is unusually full of girls.

Melodiana "O-Of course I am not trying to shame you. If there is a problem then I will leave..." -> She's saying that it's embarrassing for her, but she thought things would get out of hand otherwise.

could you please reuplode the file without password protection?

The stats of the skill "Tidal Wave" are wrongly listed. It says that it adds Hit +10 and Crt +18, but it's supposed to be Int +18 and Hit +20 according to the info screen (and after some testing, it's probably true).

The skill "Bombardment" has "Str +5, -10 Spd". The "-10" should be listed after "Spd".

Same thing for "Twin Shadow Fang" which has "+20Str".

The skills "Death Beckoning", "Fear Touch" and "Harpy Scream" don't list their additional effects, "Death", "Fear I", and "Fear III" respectively in the description.

The skill "Light Veil" lists that it has a range of 3, though it has a range of 0 so the range should probably be removed.

LIght Veil casts on range 0 and damages range 3, maybe this was meant.

Also, is there a way to look for the Buff/statuses stats change values? it says that they differs, but how do you check that changes?

Well other skills, such as "Self Destruct", "Explosive Shout" and others, affect the same area but don't have the range description because they cast on range 0 just as you said. "IO Rune", however, has a casting range of 3 which is listed at the description. You can check the stats at the Info Screen. Right click when you're at the City Area and it's the first bar. Go to Skills and you should see the stats of the skills with the descriptions.

Splendid bed adds 2 clerks not 1.

Stuff above here gone through and fixes made where appropriate. Also fixed a chunk of the late-game append 2.0 stuff.

Text fix updated, etc etc
patches/Kami_Textfix_1_0.zip

In Bat Tunnel when facing the Reaper for the 1st time:
"Yuela: ....Leave here to me!"
should be
"Yeula: "... leave her to me!"

--edit--
Beginning of chapter 4:
"Cute girl: I told you to know it off. You're bothering them."
should be
"Cute girl: I told you to knock it off. You're bothering them."

^ No offense meant at all, but you made a typo in that correction with regards to Yuela's name. ^^;

Found one in Hannah's append quest,(no 112 to be exact, escorting her up the mountain path)

If you let her die, one of the sentences she says has a typo. Kinda skimmed the convo so i could have remembered the sentence wrongly.

Hannah:Please don't orry about me.

Missing a w there.

Edit: found another one.

When making Roka's Crimson Aegis Armor.

Wil: And if you succeed,reccomend ....

Missing a second m there and an extra C ( >.>; Whoops spelling phail =D)

Edit 2: found another one doing the append quests >_<;

Wil: Got it. I'll get <b>htem</b> ....

Should be them. It's the one involving the dolls ^^;

Not only missing an m, but there's an extra c.

Here's a typo that might need correcting:

"...And instead see her plumb, round butt..."

Should probably be plump instead.